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NUS MBA Winning Sample Essays – 1
NUS Essay 1: Please answer ONE of the following short essay prompts. (300 words – max 3500 characters) *
I am passionate about…
My greatest challenge has been…
My biggest failure was…
I am passionate about fostering positive social change and advocating for individuals who may need a voice within our society. With the belief that child development and women empowerment are key stratagems for overall societal development, I got connected to the two causes through community service. Over the past eight years, I have been actively engaged in imparting education to underprivileged women at Baliga Trust and raising funds to build a school. I have also been instrumental in providing marginalised children a platform develop new skills through workshops organised on NGO Days.
One of the most enriching experiences of this journey was my work in non-profit Goonj’s ‘Not Just a Piece of Cloth’ initiative. With a desire to make a significant contribution to community development, I undertook a sabbatical in late 2016 to work on the issue of menstruation. I, along with three other volunteers, visited a small village in Central India to work on demystifying menstruation taboos. With support of two self-help groups, our team conducted around 12 participatory communication meet-ups – ‘Chuppi Todo Baithaks (Break the Silence gatherings)’. We conducted workshops to break menstruation-related myths, explain the need for menstrual hygiene and educate women on making inexpensive, reusable cloth pads called ‘MY PADs’. Seeing women gradually participate and open up about menstruation challenges in group settings was a testament of a change in progress. Though we helped teach around 40 women to accept and adopt hygienic measures during menses, this initiative started a movement that today has spread to 10+ nearby villages.
Through these experiences, I have not only become more empathetic, but also grown as a person and developed an acute sense of thankfulness for everything I am blessed with. Now, I look forward to continue my passion for the cause and contribute in NUS’ Social Impact Club.
NUS Essay 2: Briefly describe your immediate post-MBA career goal including your industry, function and country of choice and how have your prior experiences motivated and prepared you to pursue these goals? (300 words – 3500 characters)*
Post-MBA, I want to move up the value-chain in the finance sector and work as a Senior Consultant/Executive in a top-tier financial advisory firm/division in Singapore, with the likes of EY, KPMG, and Barclays. Long term, I aspire to grow up the ladder to a Partner/Director at a prestigious financial advisory company in the Asia-Pacific region.
In the last 4.5 years in financial advisory roles, I have worked with PE funds, financial services firms and Fortune 500 companies to craft and recommend financial and strategic solutions. This exposure has provided me insights on several industries and helped develop an understanding of global business through interactions with CXOs from over six countries. This experience, coupled with CFA knowledge, has sharpened my technical expertise, analytical skills and problem-solving ability.
However, at this point, I feel the need to enhance my management and leadership skills to move up the hierarchy. I believe that an NUS MBA will help bridge these gaps in required skill-sets. Through conversations with students and alumni, I understand that courses like ‘Management Communication’ can help me hone my management soft skills and a diverse class with 93 percent international students will enable me to indulge in personalised learning to gain a multicultural leadership experience.
Further, NUS’ brand value in Singapore, the financial hub of Asia, can open doors to pertinent opportunities in the country’s financial market, providing the perfect launch-pad for an international career in one of the Asia’s leading financial advisory market. Therefore, I believe that NUS’ sheer diversity, strong alumni network and location advantage, coupled with my CFA charter and relevant advisory experience, will provide commensurate impetus towards my overarching ambitions, marrying/blending my existing skill-sets with my future goals.
NUS Essay 3: If there is anything else you would like to share with the Admissions Committee that was not covered in your application, please include here. (300 words – 3500 characters) *
I want to highlight three additional aspects of my candidature:
First, my ever-expanding interest for adventure sports. I got introduced to adventure travel at the age of ten during a summer camp in the Himalayas. Since then I have regularly engaged in adventure sports related activities. Adventure sports, apart from acting as a stress-buster, have helped immerse in experiential learning and tackle challenges fearlessly. Trekking and kayaking have taught me the importance of teamwork and collaboration in difficult situations, while rock climbing and scuba diving have aided in enhancing my on-the-feet decision making ability. I would like to share and enjoy more of such experiences with like-minded peers and continue my interest through NUS Students’ Sports Club (NUSSSC).
Second, in KPMG, I have worked with colleagues and clients from varied cultures across four continents—North America, Europe, Asia and Australia. Having learnt to adjust my working-style per the audience’s requirement, I have developed mental agility and confidence to operate in a multicultural setting. I have also become more aware of cultural nuances through my exposure to studies that required the understanding of local consumption-patterns by studying different cultures. I believe that these experiences will equip me to appreciate and understand the perspectives of my diverse peer-set, enabling me to thrive in the multicultural environment at NUS.
Third, I would like to make some unique contribution to the school and my peers’ learning by leveraging my professional network and experience. I would leverage my CFA membership and professional network (including KPMG and Goonj NGO) to get industry veterans for speaker sessions and bring companies on board to participate in the ‘Management Practicum’ projects.
Overall, I believe that my diverse interests in sports, social work and valuable industry network will enable me to add value to the NUS community.
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NUS MBA Winning Sample Essays – 2
NUS Essay 1: Please answer ONE of the following short essay prompts. (300 words) *
I am passionate about…
My greatest challenge has been…
My biggest failure was ….
My biggest failure was when I let down my students in Pratigya (a student initiative dedicated to imparting education to underprivileged children) where I used to teach and lead the volunteers’ team.
My mother, a teacher, has always inspired me to impart the gift of education to underprivileged children. During my undergraduate, I joined Pratigya but was disheartened to see extremely irregular attendance and poor grades in all classes. I gathered a team of 15 volunteers and led multiple efforts to spread awareness among the children’s families regarding the importance of education. We also worked on children’s self-motivation to learn, through experiential learning programs. Attendance rose to 50 and grades improved gradually. Our initiatives were changing lives and as its convener, I was deeply gratified.
However, I had to leave Pratigya family after my graduation, passing the baton to my juniors. After 6 months, I found out that students had again stopped coming to class because the new team was not as enthusiastically engaged with the children as the previous team.
Sheryl Sandberg has said, “Leadership is about making others better as a result of your presence and making sure that impact lasts in your absence.” Deep-down, I felt, it was partly my responsibility and failure as a leader. It was a great learning moment, and I realized that while focusing on Pratigya’s outward impact, I should have also focused internally to create a self-sustaining chain of volunteers who could carry forward the good work.
Now, I always endeavour to mentor my subordinates such that they can always step up as leaders when required. Investing in others’ development has added to my own growth as an improvement-driven and compassionate leader. I aspire to employ all these learnings and someday establish a school to support underprivileged children.
NUS Essay 2: Briefly describe your immediate post-MBA career goal including your industry, function and country of choice and how have your prior experiences motivated and prepared you to pursue these goals? (300 words)
I have 4 years of professional experience as a consultant in Deloitte. Post MBA, I would like to make a transition into product management roles in technology firms such as Microsoft or Google in Singapore.
During my 4 years at Deloitte, I have acquired excellent client-handling capabilities, technical expertise and leadership skills to design and deliver technical aspects of product applications. In due course, I have also developed a keen interest in market research and customer insights that form an integral part of any new product development. However, I lack the business knowledge and operational skills needed to implement and achieve these business objectives.
Since last US presidential elections and Brexit, the Indian IT services industry has been navigating troubled waters. With focus shifting from labour and salary arbitrage to developing niche product offerings, the whole services market is seeing a surge in reskilling. I would like to use this opportunity to align my skills with the future needs of the IT sector.
After discussing with a current student ‘Anjan Raina’, I believe NUS’s curriculum (with elective courses such as technology innovation, big data and strategic information technology) has a strong focus on technology sector which can help me acquire the necessary business acumen to bridge the knowledge gap.
Singapore has a thriving ecosystem for technology start-ups and giants such as Microsoft, and Google. NUS’s brand value in Singapore can open the doors to perfect opportunities for me to make a transition towards my post MBA goal.
I believe, my prior experience as a technical consultant coupled with the business knowledge acquired in MBA, can facilitate my successful transition to a product manager’s role in the short-term. In the long-term, I would like to return to India and contribute in developing my country with learnings from my experiences in Singapore.
NUS Essay 3: If there is anything else you would like to share with the Admissions Committee that was not covered in your application, please include here. (300 words)
I would like to use this space and opportunity to highlight my deep-rooted interest and love for writing poems and scripts.
I wrote my first poem on a beautiful flower at the age of 10. My teachers really liked it and published it in the school magazine. It was eventually published in a national daily. My mother always encouraged me to pursue my hobby of poetry and story writing. As I grew up, writing became an integral part of my life because it liberated my thoughts and gave a constructive vent to my feelings, sentiments and observations. My work got published in reputed magazines and national dailies. I wrote for school and college magazines as chief editor, and won several awards for my work.
My natural talent for writing attracted many accolades and led to my association with the college dramatics clubs when they approached me to write a short play-script. I realized that my words had life and they could be enjoyed by a much larger audience. I explored my natural talent to the fullest extent in my undergraduate years by writing scripts for multiple short-plays and movies performed at college fests.
As time passed, career aspirations took the front seat in life. Still, I have tried to keep my passion alive and managed to get my book “Light in the Creek” published by a reputed publication in India. Getting it published was a rather spiritual journey and one of my life’s most satisfying achievements. I aspire to keep this flame burning by writing more and touching more lives. I try to use my writing to spread awareness on matters close to my heart such as child abuse and poor primary education in developing economies. Books shaped my life and I wish to do the same for others.